There's a hole that you made with meticulous care
In my soul did you carve yourself space
So you could comfortably stay and enjoy the warmth
It was frightful at first to have you there
but accustomed i grew to the joy you would bring
The laughter and smiles, the touch of your hand
but the laughter it's faded your smiles went cold
your touches grew fewer and labored it seemed
My warmth was not right you said, a few degrees off
And that bed is too hard, the table too low
the counters off level so nothing stays put
so left you did the hole that you carved
and left me nothing with which to refill it
so pain did creep in, and longing
Profile: Arianna Soliste by harriel001, literature
Literature
Profile: Arianna Soliste
Name: Arianna Soliste
Race: Human?
Age: ??
Eyes: Green
Hair: Naturally Brown, can change with her moods
Height: 5' 8"
Weight: ??
Description:
A witch who has appeared to Rital numerous times during her life. Only staying with Rital when she's alone, no one but Rital knows about her, or believes that's she's anymore than an imaginary friend.
She was tasked centuries ago with the protection of the Pale Warrior, but was never told when, where, or who the Warrior would be. For ages now she's searched for the Pale Warrior. Once finding Rital's family she knew her search to be at an end and she's fulfilled her task from the shadows ever si
Role: Teacher of the Pale One
Gender: Male
Age: 17 when he finds Rital, 22 when they leave the farm
Height: 61
Race: Human
Figure: Athletic, broad shoulders, what youd expect of a trained soldier
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Blue
Distinguishing Features: Various minor scars from years of martial training, rough hands from training and farm labor, the inside of his left hand is heavily scarred and the tip of the ring finger is gone, a 1 diameter scar on his right front side just below his rib cage
Mannerisms: Determined, serious, calculating, annoyingly level headed, tortured soul
Speech Patterns: well spoken, thinks be
Role: The Pale Warrior
Gender: Female
Age: 13 at the start of the story, late 20s by the end
Height: 4'5" at 13, 5'6" by 18
Race: Albino Human
Figure: Slender, well muscled, attractive but not gorgeous
Hair: Silvery White
Eyes: Icy blue
Distinguishing Features: her limbs carry an assortment of minor scars indicative of martial training, rough hands from training and farm labor, a small scar above her left eye, a large scar on her left shoulder about 1" diameter front and back
Mannerisms: Deteremined, outspoken, overly serious, quick to anger, tortured soul
Speech Patterns: well spoken, careful with her words, relies heav
The days on the farm pass now as if nothing had ever happened. Coron, Rital's father, and Telor work in the fields sowing the next harvest. Rital and Samyl care for the animals and play in the fields with the cattle. Thena cleans the house, milks the cows, and prepares the meals. Aside from Rickert recoving from his wounds and the loss of one pitchfork no one would ever guess at what had happened in the woods nearby.
Rickert sits on the porch writing in his journal of the events of the past few days, and of his worries for the future. His own wound aches from a slight infection, but the herbs seem to be taking care of it. The only explainati
On the verge of unconsciousness Rickert pushes himself harder than he ever has before. He'd already collapsed twice from his own bloodloss, but no one else had the surgical education necessary to save Rital. He'd already removed the pitchfork from her shoulder, and was relieved to find that no major vessels had been broken. Her shoulderblade had been shattered, but other than that the wound wasn't as bad as he feared.
Thena was a blessing to Rickert during the work to save Rital. She had been far more calm and educated about first aid than Rickert had first assumed she'd be. She'd already cleaned and dressed his wound during the times he'd c
Telor couldn't believe what he'd just seen. Standing there in a daze with the haft of the pitchfork in his hand he tries to make sense of it. In one blow this stranger had cut the Sequean haft of the pitchfork that he'd seen dull the blades of saws and axes while barely maring the surface of the wood. His greatgrandfather had spent half his life making these tools, years spent on the crafting of a simple shaft of wood due only to the fact that the wood was so hard he spent most of his time sharpening and repairing his tools. This boy, no older than himself had just done the impossible, perhaps he could do the same for Rital. Telor could just
For years while living at Windy Keep he'd been told it was his destiny to find, protect, and train the Pale One, but there'd always been doubt in his heart. He was just the poor son of a fisherman, the Oracle had obviously made a mistake in the choosing.
He'd once confessed his doubts to his sword master. His sword master laughed at him, 'Of course you doubt, you've yet to come face to face with the truth of it!' He then smiled at Rickert reassuringly, 'Your doubt will be a hurdle for you to overcome. But once you surpass it, it shall be a source of great strength for you. There is a calmness, a vast well of power that comes when doubt becom
Rickert turns as he hears his horse trotting up behind him. He makes a few adjustments to the bandages and looks to the girl's mother, 'What's your name?' Startled by the break in silence she quietly replies, 'Thena.'
'Thena, this is your daughter correct?'
'Yes.'
'Well we can't move her with this sticking out of her, but we can't remove it yet either. So I'm going to cut the haft off. I need you to press here...and here as i do.' he says as he moves her hands to the wound. Thena nods silently and Rickert stands and walks to Finneous who stands quietly nearby, his reigns still in the hand of Rital's brother. Finneous senses his master's an
It all happens so fast, Rital's father arrives, Rickert tries to explain, and her father attacks him! 'Why's he doing this? Are strangers really so bad?' she thinks as she watches. 'Oh no, they're coming this way!'
Rital doesn't have time to get out of the way of the melee, so she ducks, hoping they'll pass by her. They don't, and as she opens her eyes and tries to untangle herself from Rickert's legs she sees her father's pitchfork driving for Rickert's stomach. Before she can even think she's already diving to protect him. The pain is mind numbing as her father's attack passes through her shoulder, pinning her to the young man beneath her.
Millenia ago a prophecy was made by a young woman at the moment a great empire was toppled by a powerful wizard. This prophecy stated that though the wizard's rule may last for a great length of time, one day a pale skinned warrior would bring destruction up on him. After her sight trance ended the young woman fell dead before him. Although unnerved by the prophecy and the subsequent death of the prophet, the wizard had committed to his cause and over the coming months cemented his hold on the empire. The wizard was not a cruel ruler, but his oppressive nature coupled with the fear generated by his choice in troops, an army of undead and mag
As the realization sets in Rickert takes his eyes from the girl and sees a small group of people rushing towards them. Rital follows his gaze and recognizes her father and family coming at them faster than she's ever seen them run. He looks funny rushing so fast, but then she realizes what's going to happen when he reaches them. 'I'm gonna be in SO much trouble...' she says to herself as she tries to hide behind her new friend. As they near him Rickert sees they've armed themselves as best a family of farmers could, with well worn farming tools.
Rickert begins trying to explain things as the family reaches them, but the man in the lead does
It all happens so fast, Rital's father arrives, Rickert tries to explain, and her father attacks him! 'Why's he doing this? Are strangers really so bad?' she thinks as she watches. 'Oh no, they're coming this way!'
Rital doesn't have time to get out of the way of the melee, so she ducks, hoping they'll pass by her. They don't, and as she opens her eyes and tries to untangle herself from Rickert's legs she sees her father's pitchfork driving for Rickert's stomach. Before she can even think she's already diving to protect him. The pain is mind numbing as her father's attack passes through her shoulder, pinning her to the young man beneath her.
Rickert turns as he hears his horse trotting up behind him. He makes a few adjustments to the bandages and looks to the girl's mother, 'What's your name?' Startled by the break in silence she quietly replies, 'Thena.'
'Thena, this is your daughter correct?'
'Yes.'
'Well we can't move her with this sticking out of her, but we can't remove it yet either. So I'm going to cut the haft off. I need you to press here...and here as i do.' he says as he moves her hands to the wound. Thena nods silently and Rickert stands and walks to Finneous who stands quietly nearby, his reigns still in the hand of Rital's brother. Finneous senses his master's an
For years while living at Windy Keep he'd been told it was his destiny to find, protect, and train the Pale One, but there'd always been doubt in his heart. He was just the poor son of a fisherman, the Oracle had obviously made a mistake in the choosing.
He'd once confessed his doubts to his sword master. His sword master laughed at him, 'Of course you doubt, you've yet to come face to face with the truth of it!' He then smiled at Rickert reassuringly, 'Your doubt will be a hurdle for you to overcome. But once you surpass it, it shall be a source of great strength for you. There is a calmness, a vast well of power that comes when doubt becom
Telor couldn't believe what he'd just seen. Standing there in a daze with the haft of the pitchfork in his hand he tries to make sense of it. In one blow this stranger had cut the Sequean haft of the pitchfork that he'd seen dull the blades of saws and axes while barely maring the surface of the wood. His greatgrandfather had spent half his life making these tools, years spent on the crafting of a simple shaft of wood due only to the fact that the wood was so hard he spent most of his time sharpening and repairing his tools. This boy, no older than himself had just done the impossible, perhaps he could do the same for Rital. Telor could just
On the verge of unconsciousness Rickert pushes himself harder than he ever has before. He'd already collapsed twice from his own bloodloss, but no one else had the surgical education necessary to save Rital. He'd already removed the pitchfork from her shoulder, and was relieved to find that no major vessels had been broken. Her shoulderblade had been shattered, but other than that the wound wasn't as bad as he feared.
Thena was a blessing to Rickert during the work to save Rital. She had been far more calm and educated about first aid than Rickert had first assumed she'd be. She'd already cleaned and dressed his wound during the times he'd c
The days on the farm pass now as if nothing had ever happened. Coron, Rital's father, and Telor work in the fields sowing the next harvest. Rital and Samyl care for the animals and play in the fields with the cattle. Thena cleans the house, milks the cows, and prepares the meals. Aside from Rickert recoving from his wounds and the loss of one pitchfork no one would ever guess at what had happened in the woods nearby.
Rickert sits on the porch writing in his journal of the events of the past few days, and of his worries for the future. His own wound aches from a slight infection, but the herbs seem to be taking care of it. The only explainati
Role: The Pale Warrior
Gender: Female
Age: 13 at the start of the story, late 20s by the end
Height: 4'5" at 13, 5'6" by 18
Race: Albino Human
Figure: Slender, well muscled, attractive but not gorgeous
Hair: Silvery White
Eyes: Icy blue
Distinguishing Features: her limbs carry an assortment of minor scars indicative of martial training, rough hands from training and farm labor, a small scar above her left eye, a large scar on her left shoulder about 1" diameter front and back
Mannerisms: Deteremined, outspoken, overly serious, quick to anger, tortured soul
Speech Patterns: well spoken, careful with her words, relies heav
Role: Teacher of the Pale One
Gender: Male
Age: 17 when he finds Rital, 22 when they leave the farm
Height: 61
Race: Human
Figure: Athletic, broad shoulders, what youd expect of a trained soldier
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Blue
Distinguishing Features: Various minor scars from years of martial training, rough hands from training and farm labor, the inside of his left hand is heavily scarred and the tip of the ring finger is gone, a 1 diameter scar on his right front side just below his rib cage
Mannerisms: Determined, serious, calculating, annoyingly level headed, tortured soul
Speech Patterns: well spoken, thinks be
Current Residence: Allentown, PA Favourite genre of music: ......... Favourite photographer: arg..... Favourite style of art: ok....this i have to say I do prefer the manga/anime style... Operating System: Winblows XP...cause it's the only one that will run my games.... MP3 player of choice: winamp Favourite cartoon character: hrm....all time fav? I think I'd have to go with Gats from Berzerk.. Personal Quote: hrm....'Do you have a boyfriend? No? Do you want one?' I think that'll do for now :)
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Favourite Movies
one? I just get to choose ONE!? WTF?! I love them ALL!
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
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Favourite Writers
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Favourite Games
spin the bottle? OH! you mean videogame? WoW is probably what i spend the most time playing
Favourite Gaming Platform
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It's been a long time since I've been dumped. I thought I'd cry, but tears didn't come. Too confused I think for the pain to really sink in. That I'd been invited and loved, and then her to think we don't fit from such a short time spent lounging in bliss? My soul is not so shallow to be plumbed in mere weeks. She is wrong for discarding me this way. I saw potential in us and had sought to explore the undiscovered flows of her soul and to assist her in mapping mine.
I have hope yet that she'll realize she's too hasty. But no word of mine has changed her mind. So I am left to action. I'll find a way to prove that she's wrong, or prove that sh
If you caught the link to my page here at DA from the MU forums I thank you in advance for taking the time to come over and check out my stuff.
Feel free to nose about and let me know what you think or if you have any suggestions.
So i've gotten the first few bits of Naiadüx posted. I hope you all enjoy them.
I've got tons more on the way, but i need some help with it. I need an editor and maybe a cowriter, and i'm hoping for an artist too since I'd very much like to see Naiadüx as a comic and not just text. If you'd like to help out let me know, send me an edited version of one of my excerpts, an idea for what you'd like to see happen, or a pic of what you think the characters look like. I'll gladdly accept any help i can get, and if you're really serious about it maybe I'll start sending stuff to you before i post it here :D
Hey man, Mezumiiru referred me to you. She said you're looking for someone to draw? I'm looking for a storyline
Anyways, get back to me, lemme know what you think
Hey man, Mezumiiru referred me to you. She said you're looking for someone to draw? I'm looking for a storyline
Anyways, get back to me, lemme know what you think